Sola 1g: I see plenty to worry and fear about, there is a good chance that you will die from old age before me, and I do not know if I will be able to take such a passing.[*goto PC5a*]
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2i. If such a time comes, I could always kill you before I die. We’ll still be together then, eh? So let us continue our journey.
HA!
In general, it seems a little strange to be having what-shall-I-ever-do-without-you conversations in the early stages of a relationship. I would maybe add a bit of context like "wow, that last battle was a close call," or maybe this would be a good post-Ravager discussion as you leave the pocket plane for the last time (I believe that talk is currently missing from Sola's dialogue).
Some of Sola's proposed statements also don't jibe with Weimerfein's "hey, it's your decision about godhood" aloofness.
some of it didn't copy over.
This board seems to eat words like CharName when they're between a [ and a ]. And a tiny nit: it should be "lose," not "loose."
But all in all, a nice lovetalk. Good job.