OMG! Pirates writing fanfic! Next, I will start wearing Birkenstocks, and penguins will invade Miami!
I really enjoyed this. The scenario was set up well, and it was the perfect combination of NPCs to make it believable. In addition, the resolution seems like exactly the kind of thing that would happen to Keto. I can see her having some miserable, guilty days afterward, especially if she's been reunited with her parents and has even more questions about her forgotten past.
Most importantly, this is the virgin foray into Keto fanfic. It totally pwns anything the crazed Alassa fans put out, and not just because you can spell.
Well done, Mr. Fain!