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I cannot believe I did this...
« Reply #75 on: December 19, 2002, 10:12:15 AM »
Part 3 is very nice, Lisa. Keep up the good work. Did that daring kiss at the end satisfy the smut/weasel contingent? :-) Weimerfein never moves that fast, so it's nice to see it in Decisions.

Rhiann is shaping up to be a well-rounded, believable character. The same, sadly, cannot be said for Solaufein ... but that's probably more my fault than yours. :-)                    

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« Reply #76 on: December 19, 2002, 10:59:31 AM »
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Part 3 is very nice, Lisa. Keep up the good work.

Thank you.  :D

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Did that daring kiss at the end satisfy the smut/weasel contingent?

Oh, I very much doubt it.

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Rhiann is shaping up to be a well-rounded, believable character. The same, sadly, cannot be said for Solaufein ... but that's probably more my fault than yours.

Give him time.  He's barely had his chance on the page yet.   B)                    

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« Reply #77 on: December 19, 2002, 02:55:41 PM »
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Part 3 is very nice, Lisa. Keep up the good work. Did that daring kiss at the end satisfy the smut/weasel contingent? :-) Weimerfein never moves that fast, so it's nice to see it in Decisions.

Of course it didn't, Wes. But that's being worked on (isn't saying another word right now)                    

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« Reply #78 on: December 20, 2002, 10:33:33 AM »
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Of course it didn't, Wes. But that's being worked on (isn't saying another word right now)

Ah... smut moves in mysterious ways.

 :P                    

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« Reply #79 on: December 20, 2002, 12:28:25 PM »
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Ah... smut moves in mysterious ways.

 :P
                   Mysterious? With us three? Nah, it's only a mystery to the men ;)  ...now where should I start.... (runs off to her word processor)                    

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« Reply #80 on: December 20, 2002, 12:46:31 PM »
I don't think the weasel contingent is going to be content with my modest contribution, either. The smutification factor was rather low.                    

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« Reply #81 on: December 20, 2002, 08:06:59 PM »
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The smutification factor was rather low.

I know.  You didn't use the word "throbbing" even once.   :P                    

Tsuru

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« Reply #82 on: December 20, 2002, 08:18:10 PM »
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I know.  You didn't use the word "throbbing" even once.   :P
Give her time, I'm sure her smutability skill will increase with use ;)                    

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« Reply #83 on: December 20, 2002, 08:27:51 PM »
Rhiann wandered through the woods in a haze. Perhaps it was just a trick of the fading daylight, but it seemed that every shadow throbbed with the same frenetic urgency that she had felt when pressed against Solaufein's muscular body.

HAPPY?!                    

Tsuru

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« Reply #84 on: December 20, 2002, 08:33:55 PM »
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Rhiann wandered through the woods in a haze. Perhaps it was just a trick of the fading daylight, but it seemed that every shadow throbbed with the same frenetic urgency that she had felt when pressed against Solaufein's muscular body.

HAPPY?!
                   I don't think that's what's supposed to be throbbing...

                   

Kiki

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« Reply #85 on: December 20, 2002, 08:36:45 PM »
It was a metaphor.                    

L_Jonté

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« Reply #86 on: December 20, 2002, 08:41:39 PM »
HEY!  Hey now!!  Stop that this instant you two!  

Wait until I finish the damn thing before you lauch the parody.

Besides, if there had been that much "frenetic urgency" and throbbing, she wouldn't have been stupid enough to walk away from it and wander the woods alone.  Jeebus, giver her some credit.                    

Kiki

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« Reply #87 on: December 20, 2002, 08:44:50 PM »
Oh, so you don't like my alternate version?  :lol:                    

Tsuru

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« Reply #88 on: December 20, 2002, 08:46:35 PM »
Gee, and all I did was make an innocent remark. Not bad enough I got soaked in the *rain* while I was out! Bah, it's not supposed to rain in Phoenix this time of year!  :D                    

Kiki

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« Reply #89 on: December 20, 2002, 08:49:39 PM »
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Gee, and all I did was make an innocent remark
                   Hah! "Innocent" is not the word that leaps to mind.                    

Tsuru

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« Reply #90 on: December 20, 2002, 08:56:46 PM »
All depends on how you look at it ;) Yeah, yeah, with this bunch there's only one possible way to do so!                    

 

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