It would be especially helpful for people not very familiar with the game to know just where/when it happens and who it (primarily) involves, not including every area you travel to or every NPC involved!
This information is required in each ReadMe per contest rules, so an entry can be judged.
True, but I think what people want is a better description *before* you get to that point. For example, here's what the judges said about Icelus's Kiss Before Dying entry...
IRON MODDER ICELUS
Iron Modder Icelus presents a story of love after life, and kisses after death. Is the love of a shambling monster the cure for Black Lotus addiction?
"Icelus gave us a most interesting and moving story of a man seemingly cursed with undeath, who actually was given a second chance to kiss his true love and make his final farewell to her before he moved on. This story was particularly interesting because he hinted at a intriguing story concerning the wife's fall from the temple of Sune, a story that was hinted, but never fully explained. Perhaps he might expound on that side story, which seemingly has importance on the main plot." - UU
"Sweet story, little too lovey dovey for my tastes though." - Slayne
"Mmm...this one is sooo good. I wish there were more on my plate! A tale of sorrow and bereavement involving love, loss, and the unmistakeable salty tang of rotting flesh. Absolutely delicious! This little tidbit could very easily have been added into the original game, and with just a little bit more by way of side dishes would make a delectable little miniquest. The depth and vivid flavor of the writing make this dish unforgettable!" - Sorschana
Over in the "Best Of" thread, when listing my favorites, I said...
"Icelus's Kiss Before Dying - adds a quest you begin in one of the tombs in the Graveyard District (the one near the orphan & the Priest) - only problem is I've never been able to actually find the ghost's love (probably due to having other Copper Coronet modifying MOD's in place), but I know where she should be & I CLUA her in when I get there"
While not as colorful & "foody" as the judges, I think you can tell what the MOD actually does a little better. Maybe have 1 judge who's in charge of giving a literal description rather than a colorful one?
- Imrahil