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Comments on Short story: The Last Cup of Tea
« on: February 13, 2006, 04:09:50 PM »
I haven't actually read it yet, but I did notice something you may be very, very interested in.

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‘I bid ye farewell my ma’ and dad,
Cause I am getting wed today.
King George’s army is to be my bride,
Or so says Old Bailey.’

You might want to change 'getting' to gettin'. I just don't think that someone who would say ye, ma', and 'cause would also say 'getting.'

I just made that paper worth 100% :)
"Puppies do not cause cancer.  Puppies are more fun than weed.
I suggest everyone buy a puppy."

So sayeth the wise Icelus.

 

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