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Offline OfficerDonNZ

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Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« on: January 17, 2005, 02:32:02 AM »
Well do I keep going? Do you want more or not?  :) Tell me  8)

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Re: Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« Reply #1 on: January 18, 2005, 01:01:48 AM »
Keep going. We'll see what you can make of it,
Just FYI tho, it's Lightsaber. Lucas can't spell :) For more Nitpicking, Double Sabers are monochromatic.
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Re: Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« Reply #2 on: January 18, 2005, 11:05:08 AM »
Keep going. We'll see what you can make of it,
Just FYI tho, it's Lightsaber. Lucas can't spell :) For more Nitpicking, Double Sabers are monochromatic.

I know Double Sabers are usually only one colour however Revan's saber is a little special :) Hopfully I'll get a chance to show it off hehe.  8) Right off I go to write some more :)

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Re: Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« Reply #3 on: January 18, 2005, 04:04:38 PM »
Try to work on that spelling a little. Jahieraiae sticks out like a sore thumb.

Otherwise intriguing. Please continue.  :)

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Re: Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« Reply #4 on: June 28, 2005, 06:00:47 PM »
Y'know, I'm interested in this too.

It would be interesting when the group finds out about things like Sith Lords, or that Revan has had entire worlds razed.

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Re: Comments on "The Jedi and the Bhaalspawn'
« Reply #5 on: December 12, 2005, 01:44:33 AM »
Ack another fic idea of mine that I've kind of let slide. That's the truble too many ideas!! Have to see if I can get back into it again

 

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