Keto: typos

[Kulyok]

Keto.tra

@447  = ~Oh, good morning Anomen. Were you saying something?~
@603  = ... Thank you for sitting to talk with me <CHARNAME>. ...
@609 = same as @603
@691  = ~Ah, yet are there not also all manner of ruffians in the city to be wary of?~ - you may want to rephrase this.
@1055 = ~(sigh) With all due respect Keldorn--mind your own business.~
@1280 = ~Hmm? Oh, thanks Aerie.~
@1310 - nomenclature - "fourth wall breakage" warning, from the one born in USSR.
@1362 = ~Heh, oh, come on now, it's a good meaning! You don't like it?~ ~I happen to think love is a beautiful concept and makes for a beautiful name, but not everyone understands.~  -  do two lines really work like this?
@1524 = ~Watch your feet, waela! - "waela" meens "foolish", not "foolish one" or "female fool".
@2221 = ~Need I say that I think this is a bad idea, <CHARNAME>? Picking a pocket, well, that's one thing... taking some things out of someone's home, that's worse... but robbing a temple? I don't know about this, <CHARNAME>.~  - two CHARNAMES sound a little heavy.
@2335 = ~Aye! "I Fought a Mad Elf Twice, and Won!" It'll be the talk from here to the plains, you can count on that.~ [FWKETOL9]  - er, "Planes"?

That's not all - just the ones that jumped at me, and those I really wanted to be corrected. Me, I'll live without commas separating the two sentences or the like. Addressing, however, I'd clean out.

[jcompton]

@1362 = ~Heh, oh, come on now, it's a good meaning! You don't like it?~ ~I happen to think love is a beautiful concept and makes for a beautiful name, but not everyone understands.~  -  do two lines really work like this?

You're right that it is a mistake. When there are two strings like that, the second is the line for dialogf.tlk, but obviously that wasn't my intent, it's one of the places (I think there might be a couple of others) where I made a mistake in the coding and forgot the = for multisay.

Anyway, all noted. I'd like to finally get Keto V3 out the door soon, so I'll make the appropriate changes, thanks.

[jcompton]

@1524 = ~Watch your feet, waela! - "waela" meens "foolish", not "foolish one" or "female fool".

Okay, I'll bite. What does, then?

[Kulyok]

"waela jalil" might.

[jcompton]

I went back to my online dictionary source and "wael" seems to do fine on its own. "waela" is the adjective (foolish) form. In any case, corrected for next version.

[trance1881]

i found a misspelling it occurs  when Keto talks to the PC and tells him the story about Brace and the letter. the line is," Two difference warlocks worked their magics to try to find evidence of a planar gate, a rift in space, a stitch in time, by they, too, went away shaking their heads.  difference needs to be different and by needs to be but. i think it would shound better if it was Two different warlocks worked their magic in an attempt to find evidence of a planar gate, a rift in space, or a stitch in time. but, they too left shaking their heads.