I truly hate to stomp somebody's writing, but...
Jason, it's not the plot. I got that. Alassa is shagging Kelsey and kills people and they became zombies. Right?
Right???
This big square cringes at the nasty spelling errors.
I read your link, thanks. The only saving grace in that was SimDing0. He was the only one who could manage to keep the same spelling for a person's name. If they're such big fans of his NPC, I'd think they'd get her name right.
Like I said, story's great. Could be a little more as to why this other chickie-poo jumped out of the chest. Or was there no other woman?
<sigh> I have a strange feeling 'poisoned punching daggers' are going to find their way into my future.