At this point, the debate with regard to ellipses in this thread is beginning to run in circles, and I think it's time to reiterate what constitutes a constructive comment.
Moreina, your statements about Bri's strengths and weaknesses as a writer are subjective projections and read too much like personal attacks. Rather than guessing "Bri probably finds it difficult to write proper story endings" because you did not like how they ended, it would be more constructive to suggest a useful example of how the particular endings might be reworded for improvement, and explain the reasoning behind the suggestion persuasively.
For example, in the case of the first piece, I prefer the ellipsis ending, though I would tack on an exclamation point to match the emotion in Tempus's howl.
In the previous case, the last image I had of Tempus was his experiencing an inexpressible surge of disbelief. The ellipsis captures that feeling. In "Allure of Heaven," I think the words themselves, describing Aerie's actions, reflect the conclusion. The ellipsis in the spoken words is fine. It intimates that Aerie is allowing her voice to trail off, perfectly appropriate. The final ellipsiis, however, feels extraneous to me here.
"But even a dreamer must awaken sometime..." I whisper, twisting the ring off my finger, laying it on the ground, the darkness enveloping it...
The darkness enveloping the ring is a good ending, and I think it would present a solid conclusion if it was slightly rearranged to read:
I twist the ring off my finger. "But even a dreamer must awaken sometime..." I whisper, laying the golden band on the ground, and I watch as the darkness envelops it.
I moved the action of taking off the ring to the beginning of the last paragraph because the last phrase in the original, "the darkness enveloping it..." shifts the subject of the action away from Aerie. To preserve the symmetry, I amended it to watching the darkness, but the end result still felt a bit like it was running on too long. In breaking up the phrases for ease of reading, I think the twisting off of the ring was the action in the group that could stand on its own. I believe that moving it to before the spoken phrase still retains the feel that Aerie is whispering as she takes off the ring.
My point here is not to ban people from saying, "Hey, I didn't like this," and "Hey, I don't agree with you." The point is this: when people do have criticism (or praise, even), offer some
respectful building blocks to go with it. I emphasize the word "respectful" because JPS's sarcastic suggestion to Moreina was not appropriate or helpful to the discussion of fan fiction, either.