Pocket Plane Group
Miscellany, Inc. => Fan Fiction => Topic started by: Jon on February 13, 2006, 04:09:50 PM
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I haven't actually read it yet, but I did notice something you may be very, very interested in.
‘I bid ye farewell my ma’ and dad,
Cause I am getting wed today.
King George’s army is to be my bride,
Or so says Old Bailey.’
You might want to change 'getting' to gettin'. I just don't think that someone who would say ye, ma', and 'cause would also say 'getting.'
I just made that paper worth 100% :)