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Title: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: Eral on June 16, 2005, 02:18:28 AM

I liked the complete revenge of this. Bons' end is satisfying emotionally ("thank God, Kelsey isn't really bad"), but this is satisfying viscerally. Unfortunately I have no idea who the woman at the end is, which sort of ruins the punch line for me.

Title: Re: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: jcompton on June 16, 2005, 08:48:50 AM

Shar-Teel, no?

Title: Re: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: Bons on June 16, 2005, 10:30:27 PM

I assumed it was the man-hating Shar-Teel, as well. I'm kind of disappointed S-T didn't cross my mind once in the brainstorming mode, because she could be awesome in this situation in several ways. So, if I'd had ingenuity to the power of cliffette, I'd have jumped on it!

Title: Re: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: Eral on June 17, 2005, 05:06:33 PM

Aha! I never had her in any of my groups. She's evil, I'm neutral good. I miss all the good dialogue this way. 

Title: Re: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: cliffette on June 17, 2005, 06:07:29 PM

Yes is was man-hating Shar-Teel. :)

BTW, Bons, I liked the Angel reference in the main story, if it was an Angel reference, with the Dryads cooing Kelsey's name. Mmm, Kelsey!  ;D

Title: Re: Comments on Bad Kelsey:the end of Earnest Yetbadd
Post by: Bons on June 17, 2005, 07:43:25 PM

Quote from: cliffette on June 17, 2005, 06:07:29 PM

BTW, Bons, I liked the Angel reference in the main story, if it was an Angel reference, with the Dryads cooing Kelsey's name. Mmm, Kelsey!  ;D

I was totally channeling that! Hee! You got it!  :D