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Title: Comments on Tales of Fracture
Post by: jester on October 14, 2004, 07:29:41 PM
What a gripping tail erm tale ( Sorry I got carried away by my feelings for gargantuans).

As the perhaps unknown Manic Street Preachers would have said: Everything must go.  :'(

The only thing I did not get is where the Dark Lord emerged from. Is he one of the Founders turned evil? Is he like Lucifer the noblest of the Founders? What did that warrior do to the Founders? I think there is at least a paragraph lacking some story about the fall.  ???

It also seems to me that the Dark Lord is really to blame as the mercenary was only 'coaxed and seduced' into his actions.

Well anyway three cheers for the Gargantuans!  ::)
Title: Re: Comments on Tales of Fracture
Post by: Bons on October 14, 2004, 10:14:02 PM
As the perhaps unknown Manic Street Preachers would have said: Everything must go.  :'(

Awww, Everything Must Go, So Why So Sad? It's A Design For Life! (Yes, I know of the Manic Street Preachers.)

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The only thing I did not get is where the Dark Lord emerged from.

A School of Economics, I think. But I just drew that from the subtext. :)