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Posted by: Kiddy
« on: May 24, 2005, 05:37:27 PM »

My take on all this is that it can be explained away by presenting a scenario.  Perhaps, right before Anomen assaults the house, Saerk had been verbally reprimanding Surayah for speaking out against the murder of Moira.  Surayah felt the murder was unjust and cruel.  Saerk wasn't pleased to hear this opinion, and screamed at Surayah.  Yelling commenced, but Surayah was cowed into silence.  In this way, when Anomen storms in, Surayah is a stuttering weakling rather than her headstrong and independent self.

Or you could just go with the "I'm a new Surayah" thing.  Either way works.

That might work but the thing is if Anomen DOES kill Surayah then it turns out that Saerk DIDN'T kill Moira but if Anomen doesn't kill Surayah and goes LG then it turns out that Saerk does kill Moira. Sad ending either way.
Posted by: nurgles_herald
« on: November 29, 2004, 07:12:34 PM »

My take on all this is that it can be explained away by presenting a scenario.  Perhaps, right before Anomen assaults the house, Saerk had been verbally reprimanding Surayah for speaking out against the murder of Moira.  Surayah felt the murder was unjust and cruel.  Saerk wasn't pleased to hear this opinion, and screamed at Surayah.  Yelling commenced, but Surayah was cowed into silence.  In this way, when Anomen storms in, Surayah is a stuttering weakling rather than her headstrong and independent self.

Or you could just go with the "I'm a new Surayah" thing.  Either way works.
Posted by: neriana
« on: November 24, 2004, 07:33:42 PM »

I would say that we don't even know that she's coddled. But there's certainly room to make her so.
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: November 24, 2004, 06:27:36 PM »

Not entirely sure where 'headstrong' comes in, but from the wordplay and jokes in her banters, I'd say she's confident.

I agree. I think it fits just fine though that her banters and wordplay would be confident with party members. She's the spoiled sheltered daughter of a rich merchant. She would be comfortable "flirting" and "talking" to people who she did not perceive as a threat to her. She would not however be confident when threatened in her home, an experience that is I would imagine brand new and previously outside her imagination. So I would agree that Bons description of the character does not conflict with what we know of her pre-existing character. All we really know is that 1. She's the coddled rich mans daugher 2. She gets frightened when her life is threatened. I fail to see the conflict between that and making her a bard or a priestess of Sune.

Posted by: Bons
« on: November 22, 2004, 07:17:43 PM »

by what was said in her bio, she is disciplined in that she taught herself to have a lot of self-control.

What part of the bio gave you this impression? I'm certainly not portraying Surayah with a monk's focus. If anything, she's the opposite on the whole, acting more along her instincts than a true, developed discipline, and this causes her some trouble. I would say her skills developed because of 1) curiosity 2) entertainment or 3) class privileges in Calimshan. I gave one example in the early days of this mod that she could be preparing to cast a fireball, then notice a bloodstain on her gown and be thrown off kilter. She can be very impressionable, sometimes foolishly so.

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As for headstrong and strong-willed, I suppose I misinterpreted her bio: it sounds like she has unique beliefs for someone of her class and upbringing, and usually (note the word usage) people like that have to be headstrong to hold onto their ideals in the face of adversity.  So I guess "headstrong" was an assumption, sorry about that. :P

There's some truth here in terms of how I've approached Surayah, but headstrong and strong-willed are more extreme descriptors than how I've written her so far, I'd say. Some relevant issues I discussed in the old FW forum, regarding choosing a CG alignment - I think she had to be chaotic, had to have some streak of rebellion to ever get out of that house. A Calimshite upbringing in her position, most likely she would have been LN or possibly LE, and if she was completely devoted to those values, I would have expected her to not be in Amn, but back in Calimshan, making an advantageous marriage to someone who would bring additional profit, power, and advantages to her family.

The way I'm treating her, she's in a state in between - her upbringing has a very strong influence on her, as does love for her family. At the same time she is curious, and that curiosity led her to worship of Sune, meeting Hessa, and realizing just how cruel life in Calimshan could be. Meeting the PC and the situation with Anomen are added catalysts as Surayah struggles between being the woman she was raised to be and becoming the woman she imagines she could be, and, much to her dismay, it's not all pretty.

Posted by: Murdane
« on: November 22, 2004, 01:07:21 PM »

I really have to agree with Neriana and Bookwyrme and the others that say there is no inconsistancy here.  Being confident or even being powerful doesn't mean you can never be afraid; I think it's a mistake to make so many assumptions about what Surayah can or cannot be by means of her stammering lines.
Posted by: neriana
« on: November 22, 2004, 01:00:13 AM »

First, how would you react to a bunch of people armed to the teeth breaking into your house, and one of them accusing your father with murder then threatening your life? I'd run away as fast as possible, if I had the time, but Surayah does not. She's surprised her father is being accused of killing someone, then -- she's dead, pretty much. She looks neither weak nor cowardly to me there. As much as I can tell anything from those two lines, it looks like her father hasn't kept her up to date on what's happening in his business, she looks up to her father, and she's not a warrior. She could be the most confident person in Athkatla, but this is a circumstance she wasn't prepared for, unsurprisingly. Second, Surayah is far from the only victim in the game. Really far.
Posted by: Guest-ish
« on: November 22, 2004, 12:41:26 AM »

I'm not sure where the notion of headstrong and confident came from. They aren't words I ever used in the bio, etc. I did describe Surayah as passionate and spoiled; maybe those words are being interpreted in a different manner than I intended when using them as character traits.

All right, saying she's "headstrong and disciplined" (I never said confident; though, admittedly, I probably would've) as well as "strong-willed" was a poor choice of words... but even so, by what was said in her bio, she is disciplined in that she taught herself to have a lot of self-control.  As for headstrong and strong-willed, I suppose I misinterpreted her bio: it sounds like she has unique beliefs for someone of her class and upbringing, and usually (note the word usage) people like that have to be headstrong to hold onto their ideals in the face of adversity.  So I guess "headstrong" was an assumption, sorry about that. :P

As for the rest, (1) no, I'm not this guest who has a problem with music--frankly, I'm in a choir myself, and love music with lyrics, (2) I am no "he", I am female, thank you very much, (3) now, that you mention it, Eral, I suppose Surayah's father or her brother OR the pack of blood-covered adventurers could make anyone stammer, :P  and (4) on reflection, you really can do just about with Surayah, since she really is only than a victim in the game.  Still, what she does say seems rather pathetic for the Surayah I read about in the bio.  Then again, I suppose I haven't really seen enough of Surayah to say whether or not she would or would not stammer out "F-Father?  I heard some noise?" in those... unique circumstances.
Posted by: neriana
« on: November 21, 2004, 11:00:58 PM »

She's good with words, but does that mean she's confident in herself and her actions? Not necessarily. Of course, right now Bons is the only one who really knows.
Posted by: cliffette
« on: November 21, 2004, 10:20:02 PM »

Not entirely sure where 'headstrong' comes in, but from the wordplay and jokes in her banters, I'd say she's confident.

But Surayah's dialogue gives us so little to go on that almost anything will do for her character. Except warlike (or else she would have gone for Anomen's throat straight-up.).
Posted by: Bons
« on: November 21, 2004, 07:39:06 PM »

I'm not sure where the notion of headstrong and confident came from. They aren't words I ever used in the bio, etc. I did describe Surayah as passionate and spoiled; maybe those words are being interpreted in a different manner than I intended when using them as character traits.
Posted by: Ghreyfain
« on: November 21, 2004, 07:17:20 PM »

Right, but the misconception that Guestish had was that Surayah was being remade as a confident, headstrong bard (or whatever the exact words).  I imagine one can be a bard without being headstrong and confident.  Or... well, I don't know.  That's sort of what is supposed to be cleared up here.  So confused.
Posted by: neriana
« on: November 21, 2004, 06:20:04 PM »

Oh looky, more reason for me to hate Anomen. Joy  ;D

I don't see the problem. It's not like Bons is making Surayah a fierce barbarian warrior or something.
Posted by: Bons
« on: November 21, 2004, 05:17:01 PM »

To be fair, it's more than the one voiced line. Surayah has two more unvoiced ones if you count her scream, plus the entire cutscene where she dies should be taken into consideration since it's the sum of her existing background. That being the case, I've reproduced it here, so...


SPOILERS FOLLOW IF YOU'VE NEVER LET ANOMEN TAKE JUSTICE INTO HIS OWN HANDS.


//The party has to fight guards to reach the point where Saerk and Yusef Farrahd wait on the second floor of the estate.

SAERK: ~What is the meaning of all this commotion?!  What is going on, here?!~

//Surayah enters.

SURAYAH: ~F-father?  I heard some noise...?~

ANOMEN: ~I see at last the serpent slithers out of hiding to reveal himself!  Come, then, fiend and prepare to dealt righteous vengeance!~

SAERK: ~What is this?  Ah...I see that old lizard Cor has finally sent his whelp to deal with me, eh?~

ANOMEN: ~You will not speak my father's name!~

YUSEF: ~This is Anomen?  Oh, can I kill him, father?  Please?~

SAERK: ~Of course you can, Yusef.  I will take whatever opportunity I can to strike at Cor's heart, and this one has all but fallen into our laps.~

ANOMEN: ~So you admit it!  You admit to your part in Moira's murder!~

SAERK: ~I admit to nothing!  I have already cut out your father's heart and soul by stealing every last piece of business he has!  I have ruined him and beat him down like the mukrah dog that he is!~
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~And here you give me the opportunity to strike at him again!  His son...thundering into my home... it would only be right to defend ourselves, no?~

ANOMEN: ~Calimshite demon!  I know that you murdered my poor, innocent sister!  I will see you dead and rotting for that deed, I swear!~

SAERK: ~Ah, yes, we all know the worth of the vow of a Delryn.  I hope the girl rots in her grave, boy.   It is all you and your family deserve!~

ANOMEN: ~You spit upon her memory?!  Very well, demon...I shall teach you the pain of losing one so dear!~

SURAYAH: ~Father!  Help me!~

YUSEF: ~Surayah!~

SAERK: ~No!  Stop!  V-very well, Delryn...you have made your point!  I...I beg you not to harm this innocent flower of my house!~

ANOMEN: ~And did Moira beg for her life before it was taken?  Was she any less innocent than this girl?  Was she, too, part of your quarrel with my father?  I think not!~
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~You shall pay for that crime with equal measure!~

SURAYAH: ~Aiiyeee!!~

*Anomen kills Surayah*

YUSEF: ~Nooo!!  You vile dog!  I shall cut out your black heart for this!~

//The following is said if Aerie, Jaheira, Minsc, or Keldorn is in the party, otherwise we skip ahead to the next Saerk line.
AERIE: ~Anomen!  What have you done?!  That girl... she is not responsible for what her father does!  She is an innocent!!~
MINSC: ~No!  Minsc did not come here to kill young girls!  You cannot tell us that the young girl was anything but innocent!  This is not right!~
JAHEIRA: ~By... by the gods!  You foolish man!  Can you say that this young woman was a murderer, as well?!  You have murdered an innocent!~
KELDORN: ~Anomen, no!  What have you done?!  You... you have slaughtered an innocent!  By Torm, you cannot see the justice in *this*!~
ANOMEN: ~She is no innocent, I tell you.  None of this family is.  Say what you will, not even the Order will tell me differently!  All of these dogs will die!~

SAERK: ~My daughter!  You wish war between us, whelp?  Very well!  GUARDS!!~
// Fighting ensues. Saerk can be killed.
// But, just before Yusef is killed...

YUSEF: ~I... (gasp!)  I shall get you for this!  One day, I swear I shall!~

// Yusef escapes via dryad teleport.

// Then, after the battle is done...

ANOMEN: ~There.  It is done.  I want to hear no reprisements, either.  It was my decision and mine alone.  Let us return to my father and tell him what has occurred.~

Posted by: Bookwyrme
« on: November 21, 2004, 04:02:28 PM »

I've never killed Saerk, so never seen Surayah in-game. What exactly does she say, just that one line?

Just that one line.

She's also never mentioned before that, and only once afterwards (as dead), so it's hard to see how an "established character" is being changed beyond recognition.