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Posted by: Bons
« on: April 17, 2005, 05:36:43 PM »

Very belated commenting, but much time has passed, and I'd like to see what happens next. So... prod, prod.

I'd suggest editing the punctuation in some of the dialogue, but I very much like the descriptive passages, such as the introductory winter morning and the "Serpent in the Snow" segment.
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: February 15, 2005, 05:34:11 PM »

I really do intend to post another installment to it someday, I've just been very distracted since the holidays. I'm glad you like it :)
Posted by: celticrose
« on: December 31, 2004, 12:45:46 AM »

I just read the first (?) installment of your story. . . I enjoyed it, it has just the right amount of detail, found myself looking around for Rose Tea & Herbed Bread!  I thought it flowed nicely.
I see you also use the "cliff-hanger" method!!!!   ;) Soooo, how soon can we find out what happens??

Anxiously Waiting. . . baitted breath & all ( runs to get a breath mint).
Celtic Rose
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: November 24, 2004, 01:58:10 PM »

well I wasn't really serious I already had the next part written before I saw it anyways  ;D


Posted by: Evaine Dian
« on: November 24, 2004, 10:29:45 AM »

We know about the curtains... but surely adventure and/or peril must lurk! I await the adventure and/or peril. :)


you command and I obey!



Well, I know that it was meant to be a joke, but don't let it get you down, it's  your  story, you can write what you want, you don't have to "obey".


Hu, it's getting pretty exciting now!
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: November 24, 2004, 09:55:51 AM »

We know about the curtains... but surely adventure and/or peril must lurk! I await the adventure and/or peril. :)


you command and I obey!

Posted by: jcompton
« on: November 23, 2004, 10:40:34 PM »

We know about the curtains... but surely adventure and/or peril must lurk! I await the adventure and/or peril. :)
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: November 23, 2004, 08:38:16 PM »


(One little comment: I think it was a little difficult to read, maybe it would be more eye-friendly, if you divided it up into more paragraphs? )


Will do! Thanks and I'm glad you liked :)

Posted by: Evaine Dian
« on: November 23, 2004, 07:11:36 PM »

I like it a lot, bascially because I'm always interested in what life might be like after the end of BG2, and because it contains all the things that are dear to me :)

(One little comment: I think it was a little difficult to read, maybe it would be more eye-friendly, if you divided it up into more paragraphs?)

I'm curious how this story might go on!

EDIT:  I also like your detailed description of this winter morning. I can imagine it very well. Somehow I get some kind of sentimental Christmas feeling right now, which is very unusual for me. Good work, Bronwyn  :)
Posted by: Bronwyn
« on: November 23, 2004, 06:36:31 PM »

be gentle! /hides

 ;D