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Posted by: irenicus
« on: July 08, 2005, 03:06:21 PM »

thanks, i like writting poems about anything really

Dancing in the moonlit night
The moon is soft and the stars are bright
Hold my hand as the soft wind blows
And let me see your perfect face glow
Of all the beauty i have seen
All beauty on you seams to gleam
Never fade away my love
Never fly away like the white dove
So i shall stay with you each day
please just help guide my way


heh another one i made up
Posted by: Evaine Dian
« on: July 08, 2005, 01:03:57 PM »

That was really nice, Irenicus  :)
Posted by: irenicus
« on: July 03, 2005, 04:44:49 PM »

As the darkness of the night
swallows in everything of the light
sparkerling stars in the moonlit sky
The stars of the night that never lie
Powers of good and evil rest
Please follow, be my guest
Let me show you the magic of the night
Before all shadows hide from the light
There is magic in the cold midnight air
Take my hand and let me take you there

By me (Irenicus)  hey i was half asleep when i wrote this, i know its small but it seams something he would say
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: December 08, 2004, 01:54:03 AM »

Heh, maybe. Then again, as I said before, I was being a tad melodramatic when writing that poem. I wonder if he'd spout that even if he was drunk...  :-\
Posted by: Reverendratbastard
« on: November 28, 2004, 06:40:31 PM »

Heh, you're right. I was being a tad melodramatic back there... I know that our quiet, reserved Solaufein probably wouldn't be spouting anything of the sort. Ah well... I'm still new at love poetry. If, and only *if* Solaufein ever spouted this kind, I'd say he would be drunk or something.  :). Which leads to interesting possibilities...

  such as an [keto?] add-on with a Poetry Slam cutscene.
  preferably in the [former?] gladiator pits at the coronet.
  and what you've been drinking influences your choices.
  korgan, for example, inhales the bitter black and uses the occasion exclusively for picking fights.
  sabotage haer'dalis by slipping him too much mead.
  and solaufein's challenge is to extemporize something coherent on 10 helpings of bremen's runs.  standing still.
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: November 27, 2004, 06:52:26 PM »

Heh, you're right. I was being a tad melodramatic back there... I know that our quiet, reserved Solaufein probably wouldn't be spouting anything of the sort. Ah well... I'm still new at love poetry. If, and only *if* Solaufein ever spouted this kind, I'd say he would be drunk or something.  :). Which leads to interesting possibilities...
Posted by: Reverendratbastard
« on: November 24, 2004, 08:32:45 PM »

I'm just not sure if that's a little bit *too* sweet and soppy for Solaufein... any ideas?  :-\

  i like the imagery in the first verse, but it does get increasingly sappy after that.
  but my perspective is of someone who has consumed a large amount of poetry, written a very tiny amount, and not yet played the sola mod.
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: November 13, 2004, 04:54:11 PM »

Thanks Celticrose.  :). I'm just not sure if that's a little bit *too* sweet and soppy for Solaufein... any ideas?  :-\
Posted by: celticrose
« on: November 13, 2004, 12:46:29 AM »

OOOhhh, that's nice, :)  I can not write a line of poetry to save my lfe, but I enjoy sweet romantic verse, (especially from Solaufein). I wish I had such "spur of the moment" bits of inspiration! Sigh. . . at least you have your poetry a la Solaufein to keep you company until this mod-add-on is complete.  ;D

Again, nicely done. . .

Celtic Rose
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: November 05, 2004, 01:13:57 AM »

Heh, a flood of inspiration for no apparent reason.

Thou knowest of the sunlight and the sky that beckons blue?
Thou knowest of the golden bliss and words that breathe so true?
The surface life is painful yet is filled with words of fire,
Quenching, burning, drowning me in love and sweet desire

Thou knowest of the trees that sway in gentle wind's soft sigh?
Thou knowest of the grass that springs up tall to meet the eye?
Thou knowest of the river's song that spins up through the air?
Thou knowest of the waterfall that combs her silky hair?

And thou knowest of this darkling, the one that's gone astray,
Fighting hard and praying just to live another day,
Thou knowest that the surface now will always be my start,
And thou knowest that my love for thee will always warm my heart


What do you guys think? Sorry... spur-of-the-moment thing...  :)
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: October 30, 2004, 04:34:32 AM »

Hey, that's fine.  :). Glad you like my work. I was going to post that one here anyway if anyone asked me if I had any more Solaufein poems.
Posted by: celticrose
« on: October 27, 2004, 09:30:25 PM »

Hello Shadowhawke,
 I love this one!  Correct me if I'm wrong, I saw your work on that other board that you mentioned, wasn't there another one that you had wriiten for Solaufein ? To my ear they sound like something Solaufein might have written or said. . . very nicely done! Hope they're included!  ;D

Note Please: Poem below belongs to Shadowhawke
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"Darkness falls, yet still I wander through this world with joy,
Awakening the peace and love I thought had been destroyed,
Moonlight shines a tribute to your gentle, singing soul,
Awakening a fire within that burns as bright as coals

Shadowed dancing through the mists, revisiting as night,
To you, you are my heaven, my storm, my muse, my light,
Awakened from the darkness that my heritage has brought,
Reliving what I've always known and what I've always sought

In darkness wreathed, the stars shine bright from Eilistraee's midnight (sorry, can't spell!) hair,
And forever, I wish to drown in moonlight's wondrous stare,
Yet deep beneath I feel the stir of feelings warm and bright,
To you, you are my heaven, my storm, my muse, my light"

Hope you don't mind Shadowhawke ::) I snuck (spelling?) back to the old board and brought over that second poem I had aked you about above. . . I apologize if that wasn't the cool thing to do w/out your okay, my only excuse is that this one is my favorite one that you wrote for Solaufein. I wanted it to be seen, hopefully by the right people. . . (hides under computer desk in case of storm brewing. . . ) :-[

Celtic Rose
Posted by: Shadowhawke
« on: October 26, 2004, 02:03:49 AM »

Um, hey, I posted some Solaufein poetry over at the other boards, and they suggested that, if I wanted them included, that I come over here. This is something I just wrote on the spur-of-the-moment, but it seemed to fit the Solaufein we know.  :)


Anguish of a torment that I never left behind,
Tortures worse than knowledge saturated in my mind,
Lost recall from heaven's sigh as stars sing from the sky,
Wandering through a desert of broken memories left to cry

Weeping, I am lost and can no longer find myself,
Angered rage unknowing in the heart of this Dark Elf,
Yet still I love with passion what I've found on surface bright,
Yet still I'm hunted, hated, by those of surface and of night

How many times can I redeem myself to make my pureness whole?
Can they not accept me, my body AND my soul?
Oh life has fled to darkness that I cannot hope to find,
Seems love is met with hatred and the light is met in kind

Those that see me shrink back from the mere sight of my skin,
Never even thinking to look for my heart within,
Through their eyes I'm a demon, I'm a monster, I'm a blight,
So forever am I doomed to be a creature of the night
Posted by: Athena
« on: February 11, 2004, 05:35:34 PM »

*nods* We have had a couple of poems in the mod that were edited to sound more FR-ish. Poems don't necessarily need to stay in their original form.
Posted by: thecursed
« on: February 11, 2004, 07:34:53 AM »

you don't even have to disguise the references: don'tforget that sola comes with a book of poems he liked. so nothing prevents him from quoting a poem, writen by someone else, that will go well with the situation.

of course if you can use the poem and slightly change it so that it goes with the PC, thats even better