Posted by: Tsuru
« on: December 20, 2002, 08:56:46 PM »All depends on how you look at it Yeah, yeah, with this bunch there's only one possible way to do so!
Gee, and all I did was make an innocent remarkHah! "Innocent" is not the word that leaps to mind.
Rhiann wandered through the woods in a haze. Perhaps it was just a trick of the fading daylight, but it seemed that every shadow throbbed with the same frenetic urgency that she had felt when pressed against Solaufein's muscular body.I don't think that's what's supposed to be throbbing...
HAPPY?!
I know. You didn't use the word "throbbing" even once.Give her time, I'm sure her smutability skill will increase with use
The smutification factor was rather low.
Ah... smut moves in mysterious ways.Mysterious? With us three? Nah, it's only a mystery to the men ...now where should I start.... (runs off to her word processor)
Of course it didn't, Wes. But that's being worked on (isn't saying another word right now)
Part 3 is very nice, Lisa. Keep up the good work. Did that daring kiss at the end satisfy the smut/weasel contingent? :-) Weimerfein never moves that fast, so it's nice to see it in Decisions.
Part 3 is very nice, Lisa. Keep up the good work.
Did that daring kiss at the end satisfy the smut/weasel contingent?
Rhiann is shaping up to be a well-rounded, believable character. The same, sadly, cannot be said for Solaufein ... but that's probably more my fault than yours.